Review 99: Private Magician

Art: 7
Plot: 8
Characters: 8.5
Sex: 8.5

I've read this one before, and while it's kinda fun, it's also... lacking. In many areas. For instance, the art could be waaaay better. The seme isn't even that appealing most times, which has to be
some sort of law. However... there are some highlights.

The plot is okay. I mean, the whole genie-in-a-bottle thing is done pretty often in yaoi, albeit in slightly different forms, but this one works out because of the characters.

The characters are really amusing, and a lot more developed than most. The uke isn't some virgin maiden, he's just been dumped by his boyfriend and is bitter and hilariously caustic. The seme - Mr. Genie - is an eccentric guy, and often he lacks 'the moves'. This makes for a great time when the uke calls him out on his lame flirtations.

The sex is refreshing, as it's not 'complete' sex in the first volume. And no one confesses their undying love first, which eliminates at least three cliches from happening. Also, this part is drawn quite nicely, which makes for some steamy panels. Hurrah!

All in all, 32/40.

Recommendation: If you're fascinated with the 'genie' plot device.